One-Time Intensive Critique:
- I read the whole ms while metaphorically sitting on my hands. I’m reading it as a communication: what is it saying? what am I feeling/thinking as I read it? what questions do I have? when do I lose interest? when do I feel the urgency of ‘what next’? I’m looking to participate in the whole gestalt of the piece, to see it as the first time reader would.. During this I’m taking specific notes on the piece–asking questions, commenting, suggesting.
- What you, the writer will have at this end of this reading is a complete critique of the piece–what works, what doesn’t, and how I suggest you deal with it in the future.
- Maximum word count: let’s discuss.
Ongoing Coaching Package: